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Technology and Its Impact on Teen Relationships: A Podcast Proposal

This is part of a project that includes information about student relationships and technology. The author will have students share their personal experiences via podcast.
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"This essay is off to a great start. You clearly define the focus of this paper, and go on to provide some interesting insights about how technology has impacted relationships. Your approach to working with students regarding this sensitive topic is reasonable. To improve this paper, please add a concluding section that summarizes your essay with its key insights and the expected outcome of your work. While the podcast seems like a great idea for getting current information about technology and relationships, it's not clear how you would get information about teens who historically did not use technology in their relationships. This paper would benefit from a round of editing."

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