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The goal of this assignment is to generate reflections of and responses to your roles in the technology-culture matrix Using your rough draft comments self-reflection and at least one of the readings we have read for class excluding the WOVENtext write a three to five-page double-spaced narrative explicating your relationship with a form or aspect of technology and explaining what that conveys about you and the cultures you consider yourself a part of In order to construct your narrative consider the questions posed by David Nye in Technology MattersWhat is technologyIs technology inherently deterministic or is it inflected or even shaped by cultureIs technology predictableYou need not answer all of these questions in your narrative but they should inform your discussion in a useful way A Paper Follows the assignment guideline to the letter Has an innovative thesis and argument Is focused logical and tightly-written and develops the main idea in a logical and well thought-out manner Has a strong introduction and conclusion is free of grammatical and spelling errors Is stylistically sophisticated uses topic sentences transitions and road-maps to good effect varies word choice Is well-organizedreads smoothly and easilyreadily answers questions of the reader and provides new insight into materialB Paper Follows the assignment guidelines to the letter Has a clear identifiable thesis and argument Is focused and logical but fails to develop several points fully is relatively free of grammatical and spelling errors Is well-written but needs some stylistic developmenttighter topic sentences and better transitions Is well-organizedreads relatively smoothly but leaves a few lingering questions in the readers mind due to incomplete development of several points Despite these minor issues still elicits interest in the material and presents a fresh point of view C Paper Follows the assignment Has a thesis statement but argument and development can be vague at times Contains grammatical and spelling errors that can be corrected by proof-reading Needs stylistic improvement due to weak topic sentences and transitions
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