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Teenagers Fear Failure Above All Else

This paper discusses why the author believes teenagers fear failure. The author uses examples from real life and fiction, such as Scott Westerfeld's Uglies, Catherine Austen's All Good Children, and a Nike commercial.
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"This is an interesting paper on the idea that teenagers fear failure above anything else. You have a clearly defined purpose, and you do a fine job at supporting your main idea. Your discussion of how Jacob Kitano felt about failing to help his friends is powerful. To improve this paper, please revise your conclusion so that it has a stronger summary of your paper and its key insights. You mention that "teens should avoid situations that create guilt and stress." How is this possible? Is it possible? Is this part of growing up? This idea needs to be revisited since that does not seem like a logical resolution. Make sure to proofread your essay to catch any grammar mistakes and typos that are lingering throughout."

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