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"You wrote an engaging introduction that made me want to keep reading; while your introduction does explain that you'll be telling more of JE's story, you don't really share your purpose for writing until the next paragraph. This is acceptable in this context, but be mindful that some professors expect that the thesis/purpose statement will happen in the introduction. Your body paragraphs unfold in a detailed, engaging way. When formatting your paper, be sure you are also including a Works Cited page, which includes the interview information. Finally, your essay contains some word usage and punctuation errors."
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(Kibin, 2023)
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Kibin. (2023). The american dream in perspective: je's story. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-american-dream-in-perspective-jes-story-vxDm8UHk
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("The American Dream in Perspective: JE's Story.")
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"The American Dream in Perspective: JE's Story." Kibin, 2023, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-american-dream-in-perspective-jes-story-vxDm8UHk
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1. "The American Dream in Perspective: JE's Story." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-american-dream-in-perspective-jes-story-vxDm8UHk.
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"The American Dream in Perspective: JE's Story." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-american-dream-in-perspective-jes-story-vxDm8UHk.
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