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How America Should Solve the Issues Regarding Confederate Statues

In this argumentative essay, the student examines the ongoing discussion about removing Civil War era statues in the United States. The student believes that the US should follow the example of other countries that have moved controversial statues to a dedicated area as a way to acknowledge history but not condone it.
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Emily's feedback:

"Your argument is very clear throughout which makes your essay strong. Another way to strengthen your paper is to spend some more time focusing on the opposing viewpoint. Why do so many people want these statues destroyed? Why are they opposed to either leaving them or moving them somewhere else? You can introduce the other side of the argument, present some sources that align with that belief, and then refute it with your own argument. This strengthens your essay because acknowledging all aspects of an issue shows that you are well versed on the subject and are aware of what other people have to say. Another thing you definitely want to include in this essay is your sources, both in-text citations and a reference page at the end. Purdue OWL is a helpful resource for that to make sure the citations fit with your style guide."

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