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"This essay is off to a good start. You have created a well-developed and supported argument. Consider evaluating the three points you are making in your essay, mostly because the point of "children are unsafe if left to their own devices" is not separate from the phone issue and children not knowing dangers. The first one encompasses the other two, it is not separate. Your essay has some instances of not properly citing quotations. There are also some places where the grammar is affecting the readability of the text. There are a couple of places in which an adequate transition between ideas is lacking. The most notable is when you go from talking about monitoring phone use to monitoring lunch accounts. You end your essay with a strong conclusion that can be made even stronger with the help of proper grammar and word usage. Last, the title is confusing and does not particularly portray what is talked about in the body of the paper. After a good round of proofreading and some rethinking of the arguments that you are supporting this will be a very strong essay."
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Kibin. (2023). The argument for a controlling parenting style. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-argument-for-a-controlling-parenting-style-xQpxVsqw
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("The Argument For A Controlling Parenting Style.")
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