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The Benefits and Advantages of Online Education: A Persuasive Essay

This persuasive essay gives information about the benefits of online education.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"Great job having informative content for the reader and educating them about the benefits of online education. When giving an introduction, let's also give your purpose statement, as this will let the reader know what you will be educating them about for the rest of the essay. When organizing your paper, you should have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Your conclusion should contain an overview of your body paragraphs and the reader's takeaway. When formatting your paper, let's make sure you are separating long paragraphs into subjects. For instance, the first paragraph can be separated into four. The second paragraph could begin with the sentence, "Students can transfer their credits, which can be favorable." The third paragraph could begin with, "Online education can be more comfortable." The fourth paragraph could begin with, "While dealing with online education, students will have access to career advancement." You would benefit from reviewing your APA guidelines for information on formatting the title page, running head, and page numbers. You would also benefit from a round of proofreading to ensure any issues with punctuation and word choice are resolved before submitting your work."

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