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The Benefits of Legalizing the Use of Marijuana in America

This is a persuasive essay in which the author supports the legalization of marijuana. The author highlights U.S.'s national debt and says that marijuana is a solution. The author mentions that legalizing marijuana would help with revenue, medical research, and the production of products that are less harmful to the environment.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have written a good introduction that is informative and includes a compelling thesis statement. You have a minimal amount of grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors throughout the essay showing that you have a good command of written language. You included a significant amount of evidence to support your points. While you have some citations there are a number of facts that appear to still need to be cited. There are also a number of citations that are improperly formatted. You have a tendency to switch between scholarly language and conversational language. Make sure that you maintain scholarly language throughout the entire essay. Last, consider aligning the body of your paper with your thesis statement. Since your thesis statement mentions revenue, medical research, and making products the reader expects to read about those points in the body of the paper."

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