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The Bent Twig in the Family Tree People and relationships change everyday I have always known I had the loving parents all the friends in the world and great sisters I took for granted the fact that I was always surrounded by loved ones I felt like I had always returned that feeling until I recently discovered that I had more love to offer Throughout the duration of the beginning of my college experience many things changed inside me I would say that I am a pretty shy person loving but not very emotional Of course Ill cry during my share of movies but when it comes to talking about how I feel I seem to have a loss for words High school was a rough time for my family and I When I came upon my teenage years something clicked inside me and I was no longer the talkative young girl that I had been Every teenage girl goes through fazes but I hit mine hard My parents and I would say a minimal amount of words to one another throughout the course of a day It seemed we were strangers just staying in the same place At dinner with my family Im sure we all had so much to tell each other but no one of us would volunteer to break the silence I am the middle child with a sister at Illinois State University and a younger sister back home as a sophomore in high school both of which are energetic and full of life My mom and dad have never had any real issues with them When they fight with them my sisters yell back When they were angry with me I would just stand there speechless I think I was jealous of the ease they felt to talk about emotional topics with them I have no idea why I did this or how I lived at home like this
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