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Today I am going to Adventure land with my family Once we all walked inthe door first thing you see is an extended dull line infused withpeople and we had to wait for about eight minutes to get to the desk andanother two minutes to get a bracelet so you can get on the ridesoutside Once we were inside my dad pulled out a twenty dollar bill and put inthe token machine and all you see is coins sprinting down the openingand diving in to his hands as he divides them in to equal portions Somy brother and I can have could play games inside the building After hegave us our cups filled with tokens my brother and I played some of thesame games and it turned out to be a sibling rivalry My brother finallyran out of tokens as he kept getting on a motorcycle racing game with abig shinny bright red bike and you accelerate by drawing back the blackhandle on it and you turn by moving left to right Then I passed by avideo game that deals with being a police officer and you had to fire atSWAT team and you would go in the mall and millions of them willrappel down through the top windows of the building and I wasntexpecting it so it would scare me from time to time As I kept loosingthe game turned into a vacuum and sucked all my money into its tin coinslot the my dad said lets go and get on some of the rides outside beforethe bracelets expires at eight oclock and I said okay in a depressingvoice because I wanted to keep playing the police gameNow we were outside and my adrenaline is sprouting through the roofs asI walk closer and closer towards the go-carts as the smell of gas andburned rubber infuses my dog nose Once my brother and I got in line wehad to wait again for 3 minutes until
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