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Its time to pick up Jocelyn and go to practice Omg I am so nervous We get to find out if we made junior varsity or varsity volleyball I hope we both make varsity said Kaloni Jocelyn and I walks into the gym and begin to stretch After theyre done stretching they run ten laps and start playing volleyball Coach Jefferson put us into two separate teams and whoever team loses has to do suicides before they get dress Jocelyn and I do get separated Im on team two and Jocelyn is on team one We begin to play and Jocelyns team ends up losing 22 to 25 After practice Coach Jefferson puts up the results I did make varsity but Jocelyn doesnt She made junior varsity We start to get dress and while theyre getting dress I go up to Jocelyn and say Im so sorry best friend I know how bad you really wanted this please dont be mad at me I love you Its okay I love you too said Jocelyn We finish getting dressed and the bell rings We walk out the locker room and I see all the football players surrounding the girls locker room They boys start to lift up their shirts and say Will you go to homecoming with me I turn around and I see my boyfriend Andrew on his knees with flowers in his hands Jocelyn walks off and pushing them to the wall Im crying with my hand over my mouth and I tell him yes baby Ill go to homecoming with you Andrew stands up and begins to hug and kiss her I try to talk to Jocelyn but she keeps ignoring me the entire day I wonder if Jocelyn is still mad about what happened this morning School ends and Jocelyn still hasnt talked to me We go home not saying anything to each other I get on Jocelyns twitter and I read
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