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The Broken Death Penalty System Should Be Abolished

This is a persuasive essay in which the author argues for the elimination of the death penalty. The author goes into detail about the cost, lack of crime reduction, and innocent people dying to support their position.
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"This is a powerful essay that uses compelling language and satisfactory evidence to support the position. There are a limited number of grammar and punctuation mistakes reflecting a good command of the written language. The presence of so many powerful facts, along with the reference list, highlights the lack of in-text citations. Make sure that you properly cite all information used from outside sources to avoid plagiarism issues. Last, make sure that you properly format your references according to whatever style guide is appropriate for the material you are writing. "

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