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The Career and Inspiration of Advertising Executive David Ogilvy

This paper details the career of advertising executive David Ogilvy and his inspiration to the writer.
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Jim's feedback:

"This paper is thoughtful and well organized, but I do have some suggestions for improving it. Double quotation marks should be used except for quotes within quotes. Note the missing period near the end of page 1. The narrative switches momentarily to the present tense on page 2 (“he uses,” “anyone who sees”). Words should not be arbitrarily capitalized (“The Father of Advertising”). Numerals should be avoided if a number can be written in one or two words. Notice “a benefits.” The student should make clear where Ogilvy established his agency. His work should be referred to as collective “work” and not “works.” On page 3, the subject of the first sentence is plural, so the verb should be “were.” Also, “story building” should be hyphenated."

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