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The Catalysts of Absolute Power

This is an analytical essay in which the author discusses the catalyst of absolute rule and that the state's ability to impeded the forces of opposition and reduce the capabilities of its citizens is necessary for absolute rule to occur.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This is a very well-written essay. You have a strong introduction that communicates your stance to the reader. For the most part, you have smooth transitions at both the sentence and paragraph levels. Rather than saying "Firstly" you should say "First," and so on. There is inconsistency in your use of MLA style conventions. You need to make sure that you always include the author's last name within the citation where appropriate and make sure that sentence-ending punctuation appears after the citation. Also, when introducing a quote, make sure that you specifically identify the author of the quote rather than saying "the author." Unless this is an opinion essay, you should remove words that might imply that you are sharing an opinion such as "obviously." There are only minor grammar and punctuation errors throughout the essay allowing for an ease of readability. You end with a strong conclusion that summarizes the body of the paper well."

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