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The Causes and Characteristics of Alzheimer's Disease

This essay is about Alzheimer's disease. The author says that it is a neurodegenerative disease that worsens over time. Side effects are cognitive impairment, confusion, poor judgment, language disturbances, visual complaints, agitation, hallucination, withdrawal, seizures, increased muscle tone, myoclonus, and mutism. Alzheimer's is primarily hereditary and occurs in people ages 60-65. The causes of Alzheimer's are speculated to be plaques and neurofibrillary tangles.
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"You have done an excellent job including a significant amount of factual content to support the points that you are trying to make. The paper's topic is also clear from the very beginning, and it is apparent that you stay focused on that topic throughout your essay. To make the purpose of your paper clear, you must add both an introduction and conclusion to the piece. The introduction will tell the reader what the body of the paper is going to be about. The conclusion will summarize the points you made in the body of the paper. Overall, your writing is very neatly formatted, which is vital for reading comprehension and cohesion. I suggest that you indent your paragraphs and make sure to cite any information that you obtained from another text to avoid plagiarism issues. I also recommend that you include a bibliography and page numbers since it is mentioned that the paper is supposed to be written in Chicago style. Last, you also have a reasonable grasp of grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure conventions. After you have done all the editing, make sure to do a read-through of the paper to catch any errors that there might be."

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