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Dear Diary Today I noticed just how much I have changed in the last four years Its amazing I mean I have physically changed in the obvious sense I have grown taller my hair has grown longer I am now in smaller clothes sizes and my body has changed form the body of a child to that of a women Yet there is something else Something I can not name something in my belief that there is as of yet no word to explain This something comes from within Deep down maybe it has something to do with your soul but I really have no idea The thing is though these changes are not just physical they are mental as well I now look at the world through educated eyes and can see the injustice in the world Yet even now there are still many things that I can not understand nor even begin to comprehend Just yesterday I looked at my sister she is eight months pregnant and I began to wonder about the child which resides in her womb I could recall all the things that I had heard in science classes or even off the TV but none of them explain how a child begins In that microsecond when the male and female join and the foetus has life what miracle is this Will I ever understand At the ripe age of sixteen I can and do look back to when I was twelve years of age and notice the difference Just looking through the photo albums I can see this In year seven I was chubby and looked like a little girl Now I am a young woman - a young women who wants to improve the wrongs of the world to make them right Yet I know that this is impossible One person can not change the world One person can influence others but no more
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