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The Color of Water: Ruth McBride's Character Development

This analytical essay provides a summary of Ruth McBride from The Color of Water, showing the many issues she had to contend with in her life.
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Christina's feedback:

"You did very well giving a wonderful summary of Ruth McBride from The Color of Water, showing the many issues she had to contend with in her life. In your conclusion, let’s be sure you are giving a full summary of your body paragraphs and a takeaway for the reader. You should have five or more sentences in each paragraph. Nice work giving the purpose statement to the audience in your introduction. When writing your paper in MLA format, let's make sure you are reviewing your guidelines for appropriate placement and format of your works cited page. You would benefit from a solid round of proofreading to ensure any issues of word usage, punctuation, and sentence structure are resolved before submitting your work."

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