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For the Past few years I had been trying my ways on a skateboard Now I know everyone knows what a skateboard is so I wont go into detail about it And the whole time I had been practicing on one there was a move that I wanted to do so badly it killed me even to watch To me personally if I was able to do that move then I myself could die happy I had watched it many times and read up on it to make sure that when I did try this amazeing feat that it would be perfect My amazeing feat was to grind a railNow to the people who dont watch skateboading or who really dont care to grind a rail is to jump on to a rail and slide down it to the bottom But in order for you to jump onto the rail you had to be able to ollie Now a ollie is when you jump and the board stays under your feet likes its glued to your shoes Now the ollie itself is a hard trick to learn and it took me many months to actually do it right But that one fateful day I finally learned to ollie would be the first and last time I ever try what I did For it put me in such horrible pain for months and even now it hurts just to think of itIt was a nice sunny day a Clintwood Elementry School The air was nice and smelled of the sweet aroma of cigarettes sweat and marijuana And I was in a mad frenzy Ealier that day I had finally perfected my ollie and I was unstopable At that time in my young inmature mind I was god and no-one could touch me Everything that could be ollied I tried and made it with ease Nothing could stop me in my glory I was so big
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