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"You've brought together a number of important and relevant points that correspond to your chosen topic, and your approach is empathetic and straightforward, a mode that connects with the audience. As you move into the next stage of the writing process, I recommend a focus on organization and flow. Because the current draft lacks transitions, paragraphing, and signposting, the reader becomes overwhelmed by the amount of detail; using language (phrasing, transitional words) to guide the reader helps provide the tools they need to differentiate between supporting details and main claims. Paragraphs (and paragraph breaks) similarly cluster the ideas, letting the reader know when a shift in the discussion has occurred, further enhancing their comprehension of the nuances of your argumentation."
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Kibin. (2024). Key facts about suicide. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/key-facts-about-suicide-qXoN1lpO
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