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I carried my heavy feet up the damp cement stairs Everything was happening too soon I pictured my little boy sitting by the window watching waiting for his mother to walk through the rusty door I squeezed my eyes tightly trying not to think about it Hot salty tears stained my discolored face With the little breath I had left I pushed my lifeless body up the last flight of stairs Pushing the heavy door open I found myself on top of an apartment building A warm gust of air flattened my ratty dirty-blonde hair and the stringy curls against my scared expression as the wind whispered words unknown Now my tears were freely making their way down my long swollen face I could taste the salty tears on my sealed lips I peered over the big drop that made the sky endless A slight shiver covered my body I bent over and took of my heels My grubby feet burned on the hot top and I raised my feet up to the wall I felt a light tap on my shoulder Slowly I turned around and found myself facing a ledge I found myself staring into the most gorgeous loving deep blue eyes Dont cry he needs you I knew right off that he was talking about my little boy He was probably still sitting on the stained window seat all alone I wanted to pull away but the eyes held me so lovingly that I couldnt move I reached y dirty hand and while shaking I touched the soft curls which surrounded a golden face From out of his rosy lips he told me not to be frightened and I wasnt I am here to help you his light heavenly voice replied to the question that raced through my mind What Why would YOU want to help ME My voice was so scratchy that I didnt even recognize it Your little boys
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