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June 26 1999 was a significant Golden Moment in my life The overwhelming feeling offreedom responsibility fear and excitement embellished my body with its intoxicating smoke Am Ispeaking of a truly new found moment or a blunt My moment has its own zip code its very owncity and state You might be thinkingwhat is he talking about Or do you know Ladies and Gentlemen Im speaking about my home My sanctified my bonafide mypetrified my chronic-fide my sweet home That feeling to know that you can come and go as you please and not give a damn what anyone has to say because thats my home No roommate nopissmate no momma -- no pimping nor whoring and definitely no drama In reality I simply adore my little cubbyhole away from the rest of the world I set the policiesand regulations in my cubbyhole I write the rent check for my cubbyhole I dance laugh sing playcook clean drink and scrub in my cubbyhole I even shower censored shave shine and shampoo in mycubbyhole I click here and click there WW this and WW that dot COM this and dot COM that but myTo some my Golden Moment maybe simple but its exactly what it says MY goldenmoment Im still young and growing everyday With the help of God I will see another GoldenMoment when I receive my law degree Patience is what I lack My mom always says It can be yourbest friend or worst enemy I study patience -- in my home To convey to you the infinite number ofemotions involved with my golden moment would take more than a page Instead Ill let these fewwords attempt to justify my emotions
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