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Growing up with my brother wasnt the easiest thing in the world We never got along and my parents always had to brake up fights between the two of us Everything was a competition and I always fell short of victory I was different then my brother and thats the way I wanted to stay I socialized with a different crowd and I thought I knew it all He would try to talk to me and I would just role my eyes and walk away But as time past and he moved out of the house to study in the United States I began to realize how much I missed him We were both getting older and life seemed too short to waste He was doing really well and I wanted to do the same in the future We began to talk and laugh together He had so much to say and he was full of good advice He began to treat me like a friend When I was down he would try to get me up When I was frustrated he told me to hit him and nobody else When I was hurt inside he would sit there and just listen even if I didnt make any sense His time at home was precious to me and I took full advantage of him being home When he left I was losing not only a brother but a friend Five years have pasted since my brother first left home Im away at school and having a good time doing it My brother goes to school just a ways down the road We have grown very close over the years What I have here today at school playing hockey and studying to make the honor role I owe partially to my brother He kicked me when I was almost going to let go and encouraged me with his stories
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