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Dad I hate this town I want to go back to our old house mumbled Matt Go to bed Matt Youve got school tomorrow replied Dad Okay Ill go to bed but I still hate this place snapped Matt before trudging off to his room Wake up son Youve got to get ready for your new school called Dad as he was passing Matts bedroom Matts family had just moved to a new town because his father had a job promotion but Matt felt it was really a demotion Okay I know Im nervous about starting at a new school but I hope I make some friends on the first day Maybe then I might start to like this dumb place The bell rings This is it Everyone is bolting along to class Which way do I go Great Lost in the first five minutes Then a guy who must be a teacher points me in the direction of a blue door with SCIENCE written over the top I shyly walked in and find myself being stared at by 20 or so pimply faced 15 and 16 year olds Everyone this is Matt It is his first day at this school so can I have someone to show him around Announced the teacher a Mr Trench This kid put his hand up and said that hed take me around I went and sat next to him I introduced myself and he told me his name was Joe Joe seemed nice enough he told me that the school was an all right place Relief Ive survived the day and everything went okay Ill ask Joe if hes doing anything after school Joe answers Nothing Matt Would you like me to show you around the bush Theres some real Aboriginal paintings in a cave Great said Matt Ill meet you back here at 4 oclock Okay See ya then Feeling a bit more positive towards
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