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Perhaps the most important thing that has happened in my life was moving up here The fact that I left my home in Los Angeles willingly to move up here with my dad was quite unexpected at least for everyone other than me At three in the morning on July 3 of this year I packed my stuff in my car and left my moms house Many people assume that because I moved up here my whole family came too Not the case at all I moved by myself And I drove from Los Angeles to Sacramento by myself at three in the morning I had many reasons for leaving some of which were my friends family school etc I have to say I always knew that I would do it My friends however did not I talked about it with them on numerous occasions most of them agreed that it would be the best for me to leave to start over to have a new beginning They all said they were jealous and that they wished they could do the same They obviously thought though that it was just one of those things I have come to realize that everyone at one point or another just needs to leave and get away from everything It was hard moving here and starting over especially considering the fact that it is my senior year in high school Senior year is supposed to be the best the year that everyone looks forward to since well forever Being with friends that youve known forever parties senior benefits etc I was lucky I knew a few people when I started school I dont know what I would have done with out them It takes me a while to warm up to people I cant be myself until I feel comfortable with the people Im with Since no one knew me well it was really difficult for me to open
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