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On January 4th 1962 Dolores and Donald Marshall gave birth to their fifth child my mother Patricia Marie She was born in Sisters Hospital in Buffalo New York She grew up in a house with five bedrooms a kitchen a living room and one bathroom This seems like a pretty big house except for one thing There were ten of them eight girls one boy and the parents Her family was not the wealthiest family but with everyone working together they made ends meet She lived in the Love Joy section of Buffalo It was one of the worst neighborhoods in Buffalo The worst gang in Buffalo lived there It was not as bad as it sounds If you lived on the right side of the railroads you were protected No one would mess with you if you lived in Love Joy The gang would make sure of it Your back was always covered In 1981 my mother married my father Todd Morrison The next year they had me in March Three years later my dad was offered a job in Florida that my mom urged him to take So in 1985 we moved to Florida it was the four of us Oh my younger brother Donald was born in 1983 Then in 1986 my mother had her third child Christopher Then in 1989 my dads job would take us to North Carolina and we have lived here ever since Ever since she was little she had to be the center of attention I guess it would make sense since she was the middle child of such a big family It was sometimes hard to get the attention too I remember on of my aunts telling me Patti always had to be different She had to make sure the attention was always on her My mother was different also Instead of staying in New York like all her sisters and her brother she moved away
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