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Jay June 1596 One Sick ChristmasHurry up Joe Its 1015 your fifteen minutes late Claire screamed fromoutside the dressing room with a hint of a New York Accent Claire was Santas helper atthe mall Im coming Joe yelled back Stupid kids I hate kids Joe mumbled to himselfwhile getting himself dressedJoe was the Santa at the local mall Since Joe had just been released from themental institution for insanity the cost of the institution wiped him out of money so heneeded the job badly When the job was offered to him he had to take itJoe was a scrawny man Not your usual Santa Clause He had no rosy cheeks orround belly he didnt have the hearty laugh nor real white hair His ribs poked out of hisskin and his stomach looked like an empty cave His eyes were pushed into his head waymore than most people the dark rings circling his made his eyes look like they were goingto pop out any second The bones of his cheeks showed through his dry pale skin makinghim look like a zombieLets go now Claire screeched at the top of her lungsClaire meant this time Quickly Joe stumbled out of the dressing room in a clumsyfashion Looking like he had just chugged a couple of kegs dragged his
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