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Theme for English IB I The instructor said Go home and write a page tonight And let that page come out of you - Then it will be true I went home and this is what I wrote My name is I I likes to breath I likes to breathe life a life in abundance Is I a real person Or does I exist only in my own imaginary world Is I the centre of my own universe Or is I a synchronized version of the person sitting next to me Trapped in a body not my own Is I a dream waiting to be realized Or is I just me Am I a real person or am I in the clock of life telling the incorrect time Sometimes I am unrecognizable - like an innocent child staring into a mirror and seeing a stranger before them I do not recognize me I am in a fairytale But fairytales are not tales of fairies instead they are tales of imaginary life not true life Not my life - therefore do I exist only in my own imaginary world Am I the centre of my own universe am I the gold at the end of my rainbow Am I a girl innocently naively pacing in a daunting world Am I a synchronized version of someone else trapped in a body not my own We are each one of us like a pocket of air in the sky of life some tainted with rain clouds But storms soon drift on allowing the blue to be restored and making way for the fresh clear sky once again I feel as if I am trapped in a tiny bubble a bubble filled to the brink with dreams and desires But these dreams and desires have no freedom freedom needed to express themselves For the bubble to pop would allow the dreams and desires
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