The Dangers of Heavy Metal Music Never Really Went Away: What the Science Says in 2022

This argumentative essay advances the idea that heavy metal music harms its listeners by negatively impacting their mental health. The student discusses the lyrical content, the aggressive sounds, and the provocative aesthetic.

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"You lay your argument out carefully and logically deploy sources. Your ideas are clearly expressed, though I notice occasional imprecise diction that can locally muddy the argumentation (e.g., "...music is mentally abusive"). My main note is to comment that a lot of the cultural references are not current, which destabilizes the argumentation. The reader struggles to understand how relevant this discussion is. I recommend focusing your research on the most recent information, confining past trends and ideas (e.g., Tipper Gore) to a "history of" overview section. If you feel these are still relevant and urgent examples, this will need to be explicitly argued for. Similarly, and based on your prompt and instructor expectations, how upfront should you be about the faith-based component (either as personal stance or analytical framework) of your rhetorical situation? This only manifests in the last paragraph, which may throw some readers in your audience--depending on the audience--off. Again, make sure these are purposeful, rhetorically-driven choices designed to persuade."

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(Kibin, 2024)

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Kibin. (2024). The dangers of heavy metal music never really went away: what the science says in 2022. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-dangers-of-heavy-metal-music-never-really-went-away-what-the-science-says-in-2022-Cp5rkVlV

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("The Dangers of Heavy Metal Music Never Really Went Away: What the Science Says in 2022.")

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"The Dangers of Heavy Metal Music Never Really Went Away: What the Science Says in 2022." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-dangers-of-heavy-metal-music-never-really-went-away-what-the-science-says-in-2022-Cp5rkVlV

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"The Dangers of Heavy Metal Music Never Really Went Away: What the Science Says in 2022." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-dangers-of-heavy-metal-music-never-really-went-away-what-the-science-says-in-2022-Cp5rkVlV.