scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 508
On a chilly Tuesday evening I made my way to the Original Hot Dog Stand in Oakland Even though the car had been parked well over one-hundred feet away from the restaurant I could smell the overpowering aroma of the fries When I went inside I was shocked to see how grungy the restaurant was Having lived in a small town all my life I was used to going to a local McDonalds or a Burger King which were usually tidy The floor at The O was slippery due to all the grease that had been accumulated on the floor When I arrived at the restaurant it was fairly empty This was surprising because it is usually full of PITT students I only saw a few people there were two young ladies who were wearing PITT sweatshirts speaking Spanish to each other I understood a little bit they were talking about la comida what they were going to eat They seemed to be regulars at the restaurant because on their way out the cook said bye to them using their names I also saw two young girls in pink ski coats come in with their mother Ordering at The O is a challenge in itself It is hard enough to choose what you want due to the large variety but when you do finally decide what you want you have to find the right counter to order at We kept our order pretty simple despite the many options we had We ordered six hotdogs one hot pepper steak sub and not to mention one medium fry that gave hefty portions to all eight of us The best part about The O may be their unique hotdogs The hotdogs had a crispy outer covering and a soft but slightly tough inside The one item that single handedly makes the hot dog better is an order of fries A person would have to be crazy to go
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA