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I remember the day I met Jennifer there she was - standing there - with dimples that made my heart jump She was the captain of the cheerleading squad and everyone knew her in school I couldnt stop looking at her Thoughts raced through my head What is her name Does she have a boyfriend Does a kid like me have a chance with her I finally got up the courage to walk over to her and when she spoke she eased my soul Even though I was only in the ninth grade I knew there was something special about her I never knew what it was until later on in the relationship when Jennifer gave me my first heartbreak She spoke to me in a way that no one has ever talked to me When I approached her that day she was wearing this short black skirt that accented her beautiful legs She was almost four inches shorter than me I thought that she was the perfect height Jennifer had long brown hair She had beautiful green-blue eyes I loved to look into her eyes and just slip away from reality to a place where only we existed I asked her what her name was and she replied softly Jennifer but you can call me Jen At this moment my heart was racing because I was scared She continued by saying I have been watching for like the past week I think that you are cute We talked for a little while and I ended the conversation by asking her for her phone number Sweating nervously that night I picked up the phone to call her and I thought for a second maybe this isnt her real number What if she decided to be funny and give me the wrong number The phone was ringing so I couldnt hang up now Someone answered the phone on the other end With a crack in my
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