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Going against my parents authority Wash the dishes clean the bathrooms or clean up your room I constantly hear my parents asking me to complete these tasks Especially the one about cleaning my room Why is it that I never do what my parents ask of me Cleaning up my room or doing a chore that my parents ask of me doesnt seem important to me as it does to them The things that Im doing at the time seem much more important even if they are not Lets say Im watching the television an my mom comes in to tell me to clean my room Watching TV seems more important Then I use the Ill do it in a second response to get my parents of my back but in a second never seems to come Later on mom comes to check up on me and sees that my room is still a mess She gets upset and starts yelling at me Once I hear her raise her voice theres something that triggers in my brain that commands me to argue with my mom Before you know it other topics come into our argument and things get uglier and in the end two people end up extremely upset I shake my head in frustration thinking out loud Why didnt I just clean up my room I didnt win anything from the argument only making my moms day more stressful than it already is At a very young age my parents were raised to work very hard They were even taken out of school to help out the family I believe my parents want me to learn these values so that I can become a better person in life Its hard for them to get me to do the things that they want because I have other values set for myself and cleaning my room or completing another chore is not on the top of
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