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The Decision-Making Process for End-of-Life Care

In this research paper, a student discusses how end-of-life care should be handled for terminally ill patients. The student describes how the decision-making process for such care should involve the patient's doctor, the patient, and the patient's family.
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Angela's feedback:

"It's clear that you've done your research and understand the best practices for end-of-life care. Even though you do a great job of conveying the message that people should be allowed to die without suffering, your essay would be stronger if it was restructured so that the topics covered in each of your body paragraphs align more closely with the different parts of your thesis statement. The term "end of life" should be hyphenated when it's modifying a noun: end-of-life care. If you're going to abbreviate "end of life" to EOL, then you should use this abbreviation for the rest of the essay after you've introduced it to the reader. Meanwhile, there are many run-on sentences and sentence fragments that should be recast for clarity. Regarding APA style, direct quotes should be placed in quotation marks, not set in boldface. In addition, your running head is missing a page number flush right."

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