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The Difference between Right and Wrong Is Learned in Childhood

This essay evaluates how one determines right from wrong. The student uses several sources describing both moral and lawful instances to show that knowing the difference between right and long is learned at a young age.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Emily's feedback:

"Your use of a large number of sources is an excellent way to strengthen your argument and provide more detail. Along with that, however, you want to be sure to cite those sources, both throughout the essay and at the end with a works cited page, using whichever style guide your paper requires. While I did notice brief mentions of it in some of your supporting paragraphs as I reread the essay, I didn't actually get a clear idea of your thesis statement until the very last sentence of your conclusion. Moving that to your introduction will give your paper a much clearer structure, and then will allow all of your sources to support that thesis throughout the paper. There are also several consistent grammar and punctuation errors, particularly surrounding your quotations, that could be cleaned up with a round of proofreading."

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