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Lily Im going to college Mark exclaimed while dashing into Lilys room He had just received his acceptance from Albany State University and was waving it in the air like a white flag Congratulations Markey responded in Lily in a hysterical voice She was standing in front of her dressers mirror trying to burst a pimple She then turned around and said I hate to rain on your parade but you really arent going anywhere What do you mean My acceptance letter is right here Cant you see it Mark said while bringing his acceptance letter closer to Lilys face After moving Marks acceptance letter out of her face Lily motioned her head to the side and said I know I know You may be going to ASU and all but it isnt a big difference from high school College and high school are complete twin replicas of each other Both of my parents attended college for 6 years and from what I hear from them not much has changed from the transition from high school to college Well I am sad to say but you are greatly mistaken Lily There are plenty of differences between college and high school In college you have more independence responsibility and more money is needed for a person to attend In high school we were papered by our parents and from the looks of it you still are Mark replied while pointing at a plate of cookies Lilys mom had brought in earlier Lilys facial expression went from a joyful smile to a disgusted frown Lily suddenly hopped on her bed grabbed her laptop and exclaimed Well see about that At the beginning of every education journey each student depended on their parents to make decision for them As a child plenty of individuals let their parents dress them in the best way that was seen fit From the animal tee shirts to the power ranger and Dora
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