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The Different Applications and Benefits of Nuclear Energy

In this research essay, a student describes the benefits of nuclear energy and explains why the United States should make more nuclear power plants. The student also discusses how many lessons have been learned from past nuclear disasters including those at the Chernobyl and Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Plants.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your paper as a whole is quite strong and makes a compelling argument for the use of nuclear energy, but you're missing a thesis statement that succinctly presents your main point to the reader. In addition, the formatting for your conclusion is off; the paragraph has been centered instead of being arranged flush left (with a first-line indent). It is standard practice in academic writing to avoid starting a sentence with a number written in numeral form. A good way to address this issue is to recast the relevant sentence. Run-on sentences should also be recast to enhance the flow of your writing. No quotes are needed for the term "greenhouse effect" since it is well established and appears in dictionaries such as Merriam-Webster. Terms such as "uranium" and "plutonium" should not be capitalized unless they appear at the beginning of a sentence."

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