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Becoming a Systems Administrator

This informative essay introduces the reader to system administration. The student explains what a career looks like, including responsibilities, required knowledge, and expectations. The student emphasizes entering the job market with a firm grasp of the basics of hardware and software, the latter including setting up user accounts, software installation, security, and managing storage.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You strike an effective tone for the purposes of this piece, creating an informed and encouraging environment that the reader connects with. The information is delivered clearly, and checking in with the reader as you go keeps them engaged. Because the occasional informal or conversational moments are rhetorically purposeful, my comment is mostly to not neglect formal mechanics in the course of shaping the tone. Proofread to catch occasional errors and typos ("ant" instead of "anti"), and in light of the above comment, make sure the chattier moments are still presented with formal grammar, punctuation, and similar."

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