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My whole life I have been told what to do As a child my parents had the life they wanted me to live sketched out in their minds From the way I learned they way I dressed what I should and shouldnt believe in to what I was supposed to know and think When I was young I listened to everything they said and was molded perfectly into what they wanted me to be Theyre my parents and so I would do whatever they said without question becuase I thought that whatever they told me was the right thing to do But as I grew older and grew more of an understanding for life my thoughts as an individual grew broader I grew smarter and my perspective on many things changed The things that I used to do willingly for my parents was now being forced upon me with consequences following if there was any dispute I understood why they did this so I did not fight it At the same time I didnt give up to it I still believed that I should be able to live my life the way I find best Like the traveler I had the choice between the life I wanted to live and the life my parents had mapped out for me Throughout the younger years of my childhood is when I like the traveler stood long and thought about which life would be better for me to live Which path would have been more fullfilling to take And after analyzing each of my choices I chose to live my life the way I wanted to I saw it as the traveler saw the path as a life that needed wear because a lot of the peope I know live the life that their parents want for them Even though I took the path of leading my own life I still feel regret for not choosing the other
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