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The Discrimination Faced by African Americans

This essay discusses the inequality that African Americans face daily. The student notes that Black Americans face prejudice from the police and the people around them, and it is up to all of us to recognize and push against this trend.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've approached this issue with the serious attitude that it deserves. You make good use of quotations from other sources. Your conclusion is strong, although it could use some transitions (especially when introducing the quote by Kendi).

While you do support a lot of the points you raise, you make some broad claims that are unsupported. It's important to rectify this as you're discussing a contentious issue that many people may portray as overblown without direct evidence.

Make sure to proofread thoroughly as there are a handful of errors and several misused words."

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