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"It's clear you have good facility with the concepts and biographical details that can supplement that discussion: you give good detail about each figure and handle the conceptual and contextual discussion of Deism. Unfortunately, frequent diction (word choice) issues make the text very hard to decipher. This impacts readability so that the reader becomes distracted from the ideas itself by the task of interpretation. Your next main step for this paper will be thoroughly proofreading. Aim for clarity and efficient communication. Your syntax and flow is quite good, so this task will be oriented in the details of word choice. Because Franklin, Adams, and Jefferson are all introduced in the first paragraph, I was surprised that the body paragraph discussion didn't really include Adams. You may want to either adjust how you introduce the figures in the introduction or think about spending some time with John Adams in the body of the paper."
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