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The Downfall and Collapse of the Quing Dynasty in China

This essay provides information on the Quing dynasty and its eventual collapse in 1911-1912. The author explores the external factors that led to this collapse, but maintains the argument that the Quing Dynasty also had a hand in its downfall by not engaging with foreign trade.
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Christina's feedback:

"Great job on this essay about the Quing Dynasty in China. I think you have a good setup for your essay, because arguing that internal and external factors caused the downfall makes for an interesting essay. Your first body paragraph does feel quite large in comparison to the rest of the essay. Some students are afraid of breaking up their body paragraphs because they've been taught that the 5 paragraph essay format is best. However, when you're looking at issues in depth, breaking your bigger paragraphs up can help the readability of your essay. Your content is good overall, and the main thing that needs work is the grammar and punctuation throughout. Polishing that up through editing or proofreading will elevate your content."

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