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The Downfall of the World in Children of Men, a Movie by Alfonso Cuaron

In this analytical essay, a student discusses various visual details in Children of Men directed by Alfonso Cuaron. The student explores how these elements convey to the viewer the fact that there are no children in the world setting and demonstrate the impact this state of affairs has had on humankind.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide some high-quality analysis of the film, but the information in your body paragraphs strays from your central point about the lack of children in the world setting. Moreover, your paragraphs are very short overall, leading to the awkward flow of your writing. It would be a good idea to review your thesis statement and revise it as necessary so that it is more detailed. After that, your body paragraphs should be restructured to ensure that they support your main points. The title of a movie or an album should be italicized, not underlined, and it is standard practice to name the director of a film that you're analyzing when you first introduce the piece. When talking about decades in terms of years (e.g., the 1970s) or age (e.g., people in their 60s), no apostrophe appears between the numerals and the letter "s" since no content has been omitted; that is, the "s" is merely being added to show the plural. Consistent use of the serial comma is encouraged for clarity in writing, and your use of the semicolon should be revisited."

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