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The Downfalls of Being an Architect

In this research paper, a student considers the negative aspects of being an architect. The student discusses how architects hold a high-stress position that requires costly schooling without a fair level of compensation upon entry into the career.
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Angela's feedback:

"You highlight some important downfalls of being an architect, and your essay is organized in a logical manner for the reader's easy navigation. However, there are some elements of your paper that need further editing to meet APA guidelines. For example, your headings should be double-checked to ensure that they follow the proper format for level one headings. You're also missing the page number in your running head. Use of the serial comma is encouraged in APA for enhanced clarity in writing. The first line of each paragraph should consistently be indented by half an inch. In terms of writing convention errors, when you have a parenthetical citation at the end of a given statement, the period comes after the citation, not before it. A final review is recommended to fix typos such as your use of "they" instead of "the" and "help" instead of "health.""

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