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After a disappointing HSC result Carmel McCaffrey could not pursue her dream of being in the music industry She travels from her poor farm home in Mandella to the city despite her parents belief that she should learn a computing course at home Carmel believes that the city will provide her with a great opportunity to follow her desire to become a musician Meanwhile Jude Torres travels to the city to study medicine and follow her fathers footsteps We learn that Judes father was helping the victims from the right wing forces by stealing medical supplies He was caught and killed by the police and Jude feels that she ought to make up the past injustice Katerina Armstrong is the daughter of a wealthy family whose main competitor for success is her sister Louise Obtaining marks that enable her to do an ArtLaw course makes her on her way to achieve this goal The three young adults come together in the city where they reside in the Armstrongs houseAt first Carmel feels really uncomfortable and frightened of Kat She could only prevent her homesickness by playing the piano Her embarrassment after breaking a chair during a discussion makes her feel very self-conscious However after a chat with Jude who also thinks that Kat is the boss and praises her singing they gradually become friends Carmels ability to sing disguises her uncomfortable weight problem hence changing peoples perspective on her Carmel begins to neglect university and is mesmerised first by stealing and then by the suburban streets and cafes When Jude finds out that she has not been attending university she finds her a job as a waitress Carmel then transfers to singing and both Jude and Kat attend and they are delighted with her talent At the Easter party at Mandella Carmel falls in love with Anton and Kat is jealous Carmel gradually changes herself building up the confidence to enable her to stand up
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