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The Earth Is Flat like a Pancake

In this argumentative essay, a student takes the position that the earth is flat like a pancake. The student uses the existence of gravity and the continent of Antarctica as proof of his stance.
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Angela's feedback:

"It is good that you take a clear stance on the topic, but your paper is lacking in academic content that helps to support your assertion that the earth is flat. It would be a good idea to include citations to the outside sources that you referenced for your argument. Some supporting points in particular need more explanation to help the reader better understand your reasoning. For example, it’s unclear what government you’re talking about when you say “the government in Antarctica,” and it’s also unclear why you’ve singled out the country Norway and its relationship with Antarctica. Terms such as “round” and “not” should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence, and you should follow a consistent format for the word “earth.” There’s a typo with the use of “and” instead of “an,” and there are word choice issues as seen with the use of “secrete” instead of “secret.”"

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