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The Economic Impact of the Invention of the Telegraph

This is an essay that details the history of the creation of the telegraph and the impact the invention has had on the world. The telegraph was created by Samuel Morse and revolutionized communication. The invention of the telegraph led to a boom in economics by creating more imports and exports, cheaper products, and faster transactions.
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"The body of your paper is well-organized and allows the reader to understand the importance of the invention of the telegraph. You have also done a good job finding resources that support the message that you are trying to communicate. Despite the topic of your paper being clear, it is not clear what the overall goal of your paper is. This can be resolved by creating an introduction that ends in a clear and concise thesis statement that guides the body of the paper. Since you mentioned that your paper is supposed to be following APA style conventions, there are a significant number of missteps in formatting. Some of those are that there needs to be a title page and header, and everything needs to be double-spaced. There are also a significant number of grammar errors throughout the paper. Consider having someone read the paper and proofread it for you."

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