The Effects of Expanded Access to Media in China

This essay on press freedom and media consumption in China sees opportunities for expanded access in technological advances, ultimately bringing East closer to West.

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"This essay makes good use of first-person statements to differentiate between opinion and claims of fact, but the absence of sources in supporting the latter ultimately undermines the ethos, calling into question what, exactly, the personal opinion is based on. Incorporating sources (I notice allusion to readings) will provide a foundation for personal opinion, lending to persuasiveness. Otherwise, a reader might see statements like "probably increase their sense of humor" as racist, and the last sentence of the second-to-last paragraph as, at best, paternalistic. Further work on this essay to bring it up to date might profit from discussion of the internet and post-handover Hong Kong as a case study of press freedom.

At the level of lower-order concerns, I recommend focusing on correct punctuation; because your style is looser and more conversational, fine for opinion-based writing, maintaining strict punctuation will ensure clarity and reader comprehension."

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