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The Eloi and Morlocks in H.G. Wells' The Time Machine

This is an essay about H.G. Wells' The Time Machine. The author of the essay focuses on the two populations represented in the book, the Eloi and the Morlocks. The Eloi represent rich people who relax in their wealth and do not work to contribute to civilization. The Eloi had little knowledge or creativity. The Morlocks kill the Eloi and eat them for dinner. The Morlocks cannot see in the daytime because they have lived in darkness for so long and used to eat rats but ran out of them. The Morlocks represent the working class who maintain survival skills at the cost of their physical, emotional, and social lives.
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"You have done an excellent job communicating the purpose of your paper and staying focused on that purpose throughout your writing. I do suggest, for the sake of increased clarity and cohesiveness of your essay, that you make sure that your thesis statement concludes your introduction and that it has a few more details about what you intend to write about in it. I also recommend that you include a conclusion that summarizes the main points you made in the body of the paper and relates them to the thesis statement. While it is great that you have included quotes in your essay, often, they feel like they are not integrated into your writing well. See if you can figure out a way to transition into them more smoothly. Also, especially since you have direct quotes, ensure that you correctly cite them and include a reference section at the end of your paper. Overall, the formatting of your essay is good. There are just a few minor indenting and spacing errors scattered throughout the writing. The same goes for your grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation usage. Make sure to read through the piece to take care of these issues."

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