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The Forced Removal of the Cherokee Nation

This essay is about the forced removal of the Cherokee nation. Of all the native nations, the Cherokee nation had the most people and the most land covering Georgia, Tennessee, Alabama, North Carolina, and Florida. The United States pressured the Cherokee to move west of the Mississippi River. Other important people and concepts that the author wrote about in this essay are the Trail of Tears, the Indian Removal Act of 1830, the Treaty of New Echota, and Samuel Austin Worcester.
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"This essay is off to a great start. First, it is clear from your introduction what the purpose of your paper is, and the body of the paper focuses on that purpose. Since, in your introduction, you created a list of topics the reader should expect to read about in the body of the essay, this list is a good guide for the body of the paper. To increase the coherence and improve the paper's organization, consider creating paragraphs that cover these topics in the given order. Second, there are several formatting issues throughout the essay. Your header should not be the same on every page, and there are line breaks where there shouldn't be. Also, there is inconsistent capitalization and no indented paragraphs. Third, you did a great job including many facts to support your opinions, but many of the facts are not followed by citations. While you did a great job citing direct quotes, I would also suggest citing any factual information you obtained from another text to avoid potential plagiarism issues. Last, there are a few grammar and punctuation errors scattered throughout the essay. Overall, a read-through of this essay to resolve these issues will benefit your essay greatly."

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