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The first thing Jonas did when he got to the bottom of the hill was make sure that Gabriel was all right The newchild was freezing but at least he was alive Jonas then looked around What he saw amazed him There was a crowd of people who were as thick as the people in the community gathering together on the days of the ceremonies One woman whose hair was a tulip and looked to be about ten years older than Jonas pushed her way through the crowd that was gathering and held out her hand to Jonas to help him up Once Jonas was standing a young man held out his arms as if to take Gabriel away from Jonas Jonas started to shake his head when the woman said its ok Caleb will stand right beside you and your brother will be in complete sight of you at all timesoh jonas said Gabe isnt my brother Hes well its kind of a long storywell I want to hear all about that story and how my father is also ComeWho is your fathermy father is the GiverRosemaryThat is my name yesBut how did you get here Your fath I mean the giver saw the tapes that showed you deadI was mot dead I was merely playing a trick to get out of that awful placehowWell when I asked to put the syringe in myself I cheated and just put it in my tunic instead Then I played like I was dead and when they threw me out with the trash I climbed out of the bin and came hereso you left your father like thatit was the hardest part on my decision But as you know I had to get out Once I got here they accepted me as who I am A couple of years ago they named me the leader It is very different here than it was before I hope that
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