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The Great Gatsby: Love vs. Idealization

This essay compares idealization to true love, as illustrated in The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald.
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Jim's feedback:

"Your essay is formatted well and it has a good logical structure. You should write the date in your header as a cardinal number, “30” in your case. You should capitalize major words in your title. Book titles should be italicized. It is recommended to leave no spaces around an em dash, although this rule is flexible. You should include spaces before and after an ellipsis as appropriate. We write “toward” and not “towards” in American English. You should spell out numbers that can be written in one or two words. You should use double quotes unless quoting within a quotation, and punctuation should go inside quotes. You use a comma splice near the top of page 3 (and also in the first sentence of your paper). In the next paragraph is an incomplete sentence (“While completely …”)."

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